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01这节课的主线
1 到 10 这十个编号，就是这节课的骨架：把尼采那段视频里的十个结构，一个个拆出来，再一个个套到你自己的工位上。
| # | 名字 | 干什么用 |
|---|---|---|
| ① | 补充说明 | 把背景夹进句子中间，不打断主句 |
| ② | 把时间点拎到最前面强调 | 强调"就是那一刻" |
| ③ | 被动语态 —— 藏 | 藏掉"谁做的"，只说事情怎么样了 |
| ④ | 最高级最优雅的说法 | 下判断，一句话定调 |
| ⑤ | 然而 / 但 —— 严肃用法 | 对比，且不像在告状 |
| ⑥ | 视作 | 转述"别人怎么看" |
| ⑦ | 用 when 说条件 | 把个案升级成规律 |
| ⑧ | 挂分词 | 把复杂场景一次说完 |
| ⑨ | 本该做 | 复盘认错 |
| ⑩ | by doing | 给方案 |
后面还有三块"技术件"：名词化、介词 + 宾格 + 动名词、分词作定语。以及最后落到 P1 的那道题：Do you notice details other people miss?
02① 补充说明
原句：That decisive chapter, which bears the title of New Law Tables, was composed during the most painful climb.
怎么用：一句话中间插一段补充说明，用一对逗号夹住。删掉它，主句照样成立。
| 仿造句 | 中文 |
|---|---|
| This visit, which is part of our quarterly check, is about the Delta 3 display. | 这次来访是季度检查的一部分，看的是 Delta 3 的陈列。 |
| The store, which should be the flagship one, has no working demo table. | 那家店——本来该是旗舰店的那家——没有一台能用的展示机。 |
怎么算对：把 which 那一段整块删掉，句子还站得住 → 对了。
03② 把时间点拎到最前面强调
原句：But it wasn't until I read his autobiography and I studied his correspondence that I realized how sensitive he was to the body as well.
怎么用：两个版本，方向不同——
| 结构 | 意思 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| It was + 时间 + that ... | 就是在那时候（中性强调） | It was last summer that I came across David. |
| It wasn't until + 时间 + that ... | 直到那时才……（强调"之前一直没有"） | It wasn't until last summer that I came across David. |
两个不能丢：not（丢了意思全反）、that（不能省）。
你的场景：It wasn't until I stood in the store that I realized why the Delta 3 wasn't on the shelf.
04③ 被动语态 —— 藏
原句：The first two parts were written in Italy. It was inspired in Switzerland. / Many hidden places … are for me consecrated by unforgettable moments.
旁边写着四个字：被动语态 —— 藏。藏什么？藏"谁做的"。
另外标了一句评价：X 在这个场景，最牛逼——意思是，把"地点/时间"放到句首，让动作挂在它后面，气势就出来了。
| 三组 | 用在哪 |
|---|---|
| has done / has been delivered / was supposed to be | 事情该做没做、货该到没到 |
| should've been delivered by the time I arrived. | 我到的时候，它本来应该已经送到了 |
| the promotion was supposed to be running until the end of the year. | 活动本来该一直跑到年底 |
为什么好用：写 The rep didn't deliver the stands 是点名指责；写 The stands hadn't been delivered 事实一样清楚，但不指谁。
小修：写的是 should've been delieverd 和 was supposed to running——正确写法是 delivered（拼写），以及 was supposed to be running（supposed to 后面要有 be）。这两个是当堂要改的口误。
05④ 最高级最优雅的说法
原句：This motion of up and down mountains is nowhere more emphasized than in the very beginning of the third part.
标注：最高级最优雅的说法。骨架是 X is nowhere more + 形容词 + than + 地点/场景。
| 仿造句 | 中文 |
|---|---|
| The gap between what's planned and reality is nowhere more visible than on the shop floor. | 计划与现实之间的差距，没有哪里比门店里更看得清。 |
| Art is nowhere more emphasized than in drawing. | 艺术在哪里都没有在绘画里被强调得这么多。 |
| Art is nowhere more emphasized than in drawing + when it comes to relaxing. | 这里接了个 when it comes to（说到……）——正好把第 4 课 7 字诀的"状"接回来了。 |
06⑤ 然而 / 但（严肃用法）
原句：he can see the minute changes in history, whereas for almost everyone else, those changes would be imperceptible.
有三个标注：然而 / 但是 —— 严肃用法；按理说应该是这样；imperceptible = 能察觉的（反义，察觉不到的）。
| 仿造句 | 中文 |
|---|---|
| The head office says the plan is live, whereas on the ground, you would hardly notice it. | 总部说方案在跑，但在地面上，你几乎看不出来。 |
| Our plan says we put more emphasis on Delta 3, whereas in the store, it would look like a discount aisle. | 我们的方案说重点推 Delta 3，但在店里，它看着像个折扣货架。 |
为什么用 would：用 is not 像在告状，用 would 就是在陈述——"按理说应该是这样"。把这句标成"严肃用法"，因为它只在正式场合用，口语闲聊里用 but 就够了。
07⑥ 视作
原句：I've always known or thought of Nietzsche as someone who's very sensitive in the soul.
标注：视作。骨架是 know / think of / see / take + 宾语 + as + 名词短语。
| 仿造句 | 中文 |
|---|---|
| I see Tiger as someone who's very responsive. | 我看 Tiger 是个反应很快的人。 |
| I take the demo table as something incredible / thought-provoking. | 我把展示桌当成一件了不起的、发人深思的东西。 |
特意标了 thought-provoking = 发人深思。这个词组在讲"什么东西好"的时候非常好用。
别错：as 后面接名词短语，不接句子。
08⑦ 用 when 说条件
原句：My muscular agility has always been greatest when my creative power has flowed most abundantly.
标注：用 when 说条件。主句用完成时（has always been），when 从句说"在什么条件下"。
它的价值：把"这一次如何"升级成"历来如此"。这一条和上一节课（第 6 课）的"用规律说话"是同一个东西，只是这次从句用的是 when 而不是 when 引导的时间。
你的场景：Sell-through has always been strongest when the demo table is staffed.
09⑧ 挂分词
原句：about him trying to find people who are similar to him, who are as equals, always being disappointed in some way, and then eventually retreating into the mountains for solitude.
标注：挂分词，把复杂场景全说完。一个介词后面，挂了三串分词，动作一条接一条。
| 圈出来的两个词 | 说明 |
|---|---|
| about + 宾语 him | 介词后面要接宾格（him，不是 he） |
| 动词名词化 | trying / being disappointed / retreating 都是动词变来的 -ing，当名词用 |
旁注：in search of solitude = 寻找独处 / 隐居 / 宁静。
10⑨ 本该做
原句：so clearly I should have known better.
标注：本该做。结构 should have + 过去分词。
你的场景：We should have sent the stands two weeks before launch.
顺序提醒：复盘时先认自己这边，再提对方的——顺序反了，合作就僵。
11⑩ by doing
原句：Nietzsche collapses this distinction between soul and body by essentially ignoring the soul.
结构 by + 动名词 = "通过……的方式"。
你的场景：We can close most of it by moving the table back to the entrance.
别错：by 后面是 doing，不是 do。
12名词化：把动作压成形容词
右边竖着写了一串，全是同一个套路：
看出规律了吗——上面三行是压好的，下面两行是原句拆开的样子：
| 原句 | 压成形容词 |
|---|---|
| the girl who hates the world | the world-hating girl |
| a bastard who spits phlegm | a phlegm-spitting bastard |
| someone who sips latte | a latte-sipping someone |
规则：动词 + 宾语 压成一个"宾语-动词ing"的复合形容词，中间用连字符，放在名词前面。
为什么这是高阶表达：它省掉了一个定语从句，而且带着态度——说 a phlegm-spitting bastard 比说 a man who spits 狠得多。写文案、讲产品、吐槽都用得上。
13介词 + 宾格 + 动名词
先写了一个"对"字形的示意图，然后给了一串例子：
结构：介词 + 宾格（me/him）+ 动名词（doing）。中间那个词必须是宾格，不是主格——不说 I playing，要说 me playing。
| 列的时间介词 | 配什么 |
|---|---|
| for | for a bunch of freshmen（给一群大一新生） |
| on | on stage / on the floor |
| at | at the stage（在台前） |
| in | in the NBA（在 NBA） |
还有一句更花的（中段的"华丽倒装"）：
the following winter, beneath the halcyon sky of Nice, which then shone into my life for the first time, I found the third Zarathustra and was done.
把时间、地点、外加一个 which 从句全堆在句首，主句才出场——在旁边写了 FULL RANGE，意思就是"把整段音域都用上"。
14分词作定语：working
三个词：running dog / running man / running men，标注：working 做定语 = 能用的。
| 分词 | 做定语 | 意思 |
|---|---|---|
| work | a working demo table | 一台能用的展示桌 |
| run | a running dog / a running man | 一只在跑的狗 / 一个在跑的人 |
| deliver | the delivered units | 已经送到的机器 |
你的场景（原句）：The store, which should be the flagship one, has no working demo table.
一句话里同时用了①（which 补充说明）和本条的 working 作定语——这就是想让你看到的叠加。
15P1：你注意得到别人漏掉的细节吗
最后落到一道 P1 题：Do you notice details other people miss?（你注意得到别人漏掉的细节吗？）
第一段可以这么起（把 ⑤ 用上）：
Yes, I think so — at least at work. Nietzsche could see the minute changes in history, whereas for almost everyone else, those changes would be imperceptible. That's basically my job: the numbers look fine on a report, and then you stand in the store and see something completely different.
第二段接"我什么时候才意识到的"（把 ② 用上）：
It wasn't until last October, when I visited these local stores in the Netherlands, that I realized how much never makes it into a report.
收尾的金句（三个里选一个）：
| 英文 | 中文 |
|---|---|
| Details are facts that won't disappear — you just have to be in the room. | 细节是消失不了的事实，你只要在场就行。 |
| You have to get your hands dirty. | 你得亲手去干、下场子去摸。 |
| I prefer to see things first hand. | 我更喜欢亲眼、亲手看到。 |
右下还留了三个同类表达：go the extra mile（多走一里 / 做得比要求多）、put my feet on the ground（脚踏实地）、get your hands dirty（亲自下场）。
16自查 · 打勾
- ① 会写带逗号的补充说明，且两个逗号都不丢
- ② 会用 It wasn't until … that …，not 和 that 都不丢
- ③ 会用被动藏掉"谁做的"：has been delivered / was supposed to be running
- ④ 会用 nowhere more … than 下一句判断
- ⑤ 会用 whereas + would 说"方案 vs 现实"，且不显得在告状
- ⑥ 会用 see / take … as … 转述别人怎么看（as 后面是名词）
- ⑦ 会用 has always been … when … 说一条规律
- ⑧ 会在一句话里挂两串以上分词，把复杂场景说完
- ⑨⑩ 会用 should have done 认自己这边、用 by doing 给方案
- 会把"动词+宾语"压成复合形容词（world-hating / phlegm-spitting）
- 会用"介词 + 宾格 + 动名词"：dreamt of me playing basketball
- 会用 working 这类分词作定语（a working demo table）
- 能把 P1「Do you notice details other people miss?」答满 4–5 句，用上 ② 和 ⑤